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Blade

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The sweet taste of pain
Lingering at the end of every nerve
Dripping blood like fresh drops of rain
This blade is the only master I serve.
I'm in a morbid mood right now.
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Hello, I am (okay late but forgive me) from :iconpoeticalcondition:

This work... okay you were in a morbid mood but managed to write quite an amazing work. While I personally dislike works based on self infliction of pain and all, this work appeals to me in a poetical way. It is a Quatrain which is a form I have written in and personally like. It also, like 6 word stories, holds a lot of depth in a short work which makes it more wonderful.

So coming to the work directly, the expressions in every single line are well formed, they merge well and the meaning they give off - while I don't approve of it - comes about beautifully. The last line especially was beautiful. I hope it does not reflect on anything you do in real life ^^;

That is all, I hope you are doing well :D